Rewrite The Stars:
– Great work recording this! Have a listen below
– Beautiful control in your first verse…!
– Careful on “stars” in the first chorus (find your chest voice again – which you managed in the second chorus!)
– You’ve done well on this – just work on that middle 8 (“all I want is to fall”)
– Then practice the final chorus!
Don’t Kill My Vibe:
– You sound pretty pro at this already! Here’s your first recording below
– Practice switching fast into head voice in the chorus but then chest voice for “don’t kill my vibe”